Moon-nama-an ode to the Moon

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On a dull Autumn evening,

I sit on my rocking chair,

In the warmth of my house,

Lost in thoughts,

When the reverie is broken,

By a gentle knock on the window……

I open it a bit,

And the Moon sneaks in,

A blob of jelly,

Tired and crestfallen,

Pale and yellow,

Smothered in dust and haze,

Smoke and fumes,

Insignificant in the star spangled cosmos…….

But as the hours go by,

Bathed in milk,

The duckling becomes a swan,

Fresh and confident,

It’s mystique restored,

Resplendent as a diva,

A million poets’ muse,

Rising to its apogee ………

Till dawn comes,

On the crest of the ascendant Sun,

And the Moon melts,

Slowly, ever so slowly,

A drop of dew on the petal of a rose,

Over the horizon,

A Prima Donna in decline,

Shunned from the arc lights,

Its aura diminished……..

But we know,

That the Moon is different,

It will rise, again, and again,

The next night, and the next,

Ever so beautiful,

Ever so peaceful,

Ever so reassuring……

28 responses to “Moon-nama-an ode to the Moon”

  1. farheez Avatar

    Nice… And on my favourite topic… Very beautiful… Nice play with the words….

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Means a lot from an eminent poet like you…..gratitude

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  2. yaserhusain Avatar
    yaserhusain

    Awesome Words Sir!
    So touching…
    Moon Nama in true sense.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Grateful…..ur continuous support and appreciation for my work is truly a morale booster….something which inspires me to write better…

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  3. dharmila Avatar
    dharmila

    Super one.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks madam for your continuous support, blessings and appreciation….ever so grateful..

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  4. Abrar Sheriff M Avatar
    Abrar Sheriff M

    ChandaMama, Moonwalk and all connected with Moon. A Romance with Moon by Poets gives Sun the jitters. Splendidly it evokes love to the Creator. Thus it is a Boon that poets have the Moon to make us Swoon.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      The review is better than the composition….thanks brother, nothing more to say

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  5. sanjaymadaneok Avatar
    sanjaymadaneok

    👍Great composition! Hopefully the dawn on your recitals never sets in😊

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your review- which you manage despite your busy schedule; and grateful for your wishes and appreciation

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  6. vandanadu Avatar
    vandanadu

    Mesmerizing
    All of us have grown up waiting for that glimpse of Moon from our Terrace

    Baithe rahe Tasavure jaana kiye hue
    Dil dhundta hai phir wahi fursat ke Raat din। 💞

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks for the review buddy- despite your busy schedule; yes, we have all grown up loving our beloved Chanda-Mama

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  7. pknayar1970 Avatar

    Great ! And ever so melting !

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Indeed…the moon as a muse is a always in vogue..grateful for having thru it despite ur. Busy schedule…

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  8. Kulvinder Kaur Avatar
    Kulvinder Kaur

    All it reminds me of the greatest songs made over moon to compare the heroine s beauty like chaudvin Ka Chand ho gurudutts imagination of waheeda Rehman then Chand si mehbooba hogi MERI bas Aida Maine socha na the Haan tum bilkul waisi hi ho jaisamaine socha tha besides chandamama door as Sahi batate etc etc asp khayein thali mein munne ki Dr pyali mein and Lori’s or on its light Chandni o MERI Chandni besides going on moon mission although we all souls come from way beyond this charismatic galaxy figure and travel much faster than doped of any light sound with human soul reaching far beyond the moon sun every day and return back to earth 🌎 a god’s marvel not appreciated by we humans what we are basically ignorant of this fact till the supreme soul had chosen to come and chat with us Anyhow in history books it is enclosed as a symbol of depicting beauty etcetc.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks di for taking time from ur busy schedule to write d comments…you have rightly pointed out the contribution of hindi cinema to make the moon a part of our collective conscience..

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  9. Sandeep Mathur Avatar
    Sandeep Mathur

    Very nice composition
    👍👍

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Grateful bro…..for your words of appreciation…

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  10. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    Moon has always been a symbol of peace, tranquility and it has been portrayed in the same fashion in your poetry also; reflects you inner self also

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Brother…..a second observation for the same composition…a real bonanza for me ..you have made my day…..grateful

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  11. Amar preet Ahluwalia Avatar
    Amar preet Ahluwalia

    I never knew the moon could be described in such a marvelous way. It’s as if while reading the poetry , one has fallen in love with the moon . Great poetry mere dost

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your words of appreciation…goes a long way to boost my morale and inspires me to hone my skills to write better….gratitude…

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  12. Gopi Avatar
    Gopi

    Well written

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear for your appreciation…gratitude…

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  13. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    Superbly composed; stars with a lose note but in the end is a very well rounded poetry with your signature optimistic note.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Rajiv…I am ever so grateful to you for taking time from ur busy schedule and going through my compositions and your critical observations which go a long way to make me a better poet and author….grateful brother

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  14. JP Singh Avatar
    JP Singh

    Beautifully written

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks my guiding light ..your appreciation means the world to me …

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