Once in a while

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On a cold, overcast evening, driving home from work,

Strapped to the seat of my car, in my beloved Delhi,

Eyes fuzzy with sleep, body fatigued,

Mind, a clutter of thoughts,

Random, choc-a-block,

Like the vehicles all around,

I maneuver my gaze all across,

For a few, idle seconds,

Till it fixates on the pillion of a bike.

A thin veil over her face, drenched, blown away,                                                

Mesmerizing embers of passion, meet mine,

A quiver pulsates through my spine,

A thousand doves flutter in my heart,

Once in a while……..

The green emeralds seize me,

Dragging me to the bottom of the lake,

I, her prisoner, liberated from the world,

For the eternity of that moment,

Wish, it could last forever,

But Alas! soon it was all over,

As the traffic eased,

And I was shaken from my reverie,

By the honking of horns,

As she set me free, into my prison,

Once in a while………

30 responses to “Once in a while”

  1. yaserhusain Avatar
    yaserhusain

    Beautifully penned Sir,
    ‘A thing of beauty is a joy forever’

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      A sweet and precise and apt review dear….grateful

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  2. I S Khanna Avatar

    The feelings of appreciating the beauty the way these have been depicted with complete rythem effortlessly give a beep peep into the ability of writer who has even gone to the extent of defining the green eyes as emeralds and that too while feeling fuddy and tired AND driving back home from arduous work in office.
    Some one expecting appreciation of inner beauty only while being non-responsive and oblivious to the external beauty in such a beautiful weather perhaps needs refresher coaching to see the beauty as it is as also applaud inner one.
    The range of your penetrating eyes even while being drowsy and prisoner to be freed only after honking by following vehicles is astounding.
    Do all this and more on road albeit cautiously.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Uncle, more than the delicacy of the emotions captured by me in the poem it is the depth of your review which is more significant…so grateful to you for being a keen reader of all my compositions and giving your feedback which acts as a morale booster for me…ever so grateful…

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  3. vandanadu Avatar
    vandanadu

    When the surroundings are full your choice to observe will create the mood…

    It’s amazing to be able to see a beauty amidst the Chaos….

    Truely ” the beauty lies in the eyes of ……..”

    Continue inspiring….

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks for motivating me to write….like a good teacher that you are๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’˜

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  4. Kulvinder Kaur Avatar
    Kulvinder Kaur

    This is one post where you would not like my reply I look at the internal beauty and even from spiritualangle they described ๐Ÿ‘‚ lier it was guru at later age on vanvas later and child hood then adult good marriage children and then take to spirituality although with kalyug these things changing although supreme soul teaches totally even against marriage or for going to satyug purity total brahmcharya and actually that gives energy to body I know lot of people would be sceptical about my comments om shanti .

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks didi….

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  5. pknayar1970 Avatar

    Wah wah

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Brother…..thanks for
      acknowledging and appreciating each composition…..means the world to me….gratitude…

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  6. Amar preet Ahluwalia Avatar
    Amar preet Ahluwalia

    Wah bhai wah Aps…liberated from the world and again back to prison, wonderful way to express a sweet feeling of love and attraction towards a beautiful woman …reminded me of the shayari …ki Tumse rishta kuch aise bana hamara…ki na hi hum bandhe gaye…nahi ab Azaad rahe

    Keep writing …you evoke deep feelings in others…very good

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Dear Amar, the ultimate acknowledgement of an artist’s skill is when the reader or listener or viewer becomes one with the composition…i am really honored by your comments….so grateful brother….do keep reading my work please….

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  7. dharmila Avatar
    dharmila

    So beautiful. Could visualize the whole scene.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks madam for your words of appreciation…..ever so grateful

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  8. Radhika Avatar

    Beautifully composed. The longing has been portrayed so subtly… it felt like reminder of the home one never had, but they know somewhere they belong.

    Thank you for sharing it with me, sir. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks beta for having gone through the post despite your busy schedule…..as far as the review goes it does seem better than the composition….grateful dear

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  9. sanjaymadaneok Avatar
    sanjaymadaneok

    Kya baat hai๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Dhanyaavaad bhai

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  10. delhiprince Avatar
    delhiprince

    Very well done Prince…captures the momentary random stream of consciousness of thoughts very well๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Sent from my iPhone

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Didi…thanks for your words of appreciation…..means a lot to me…..the nuances of the poem have been captured by you in ur review…gratitude..

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  11. Abrar Sheriff M Avatar
    Abrar Sheriff M

    Good indulgence in appreciation, however drive carefully, thoughts set free as your heart pounds happy juices.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Will take your care brother……to be ร  careful driver in d future

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  12. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    These fleeting memories only keeps one going. The moment has been captured very nicely and you try to prolong the effect so that the magic remains. But as usual , these moments are there to go only and come again in some different from.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Bro….as usual, you have cast a web of words in sync with the theme of the poem to paint d review…….which comes out so well…..gratitude…..

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  13. dtnaturelover Avatar
    dtnaturelover

    Romantic bird having flight of fantasy

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your review, this time as a
      euphemisms, but that the premise was real….hugely gratful…….

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  14. mmalhotra77 Avatar
    mmalhotra77

    So sweet and romantic!

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks meri jaan….just like u…

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  15. Sandeep Mathur Avatar
    Sandeep Mathur

    Very Nice AP ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks Sandeep for having gone thru the poem and your words of appreciation…..grateful…

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