Connecting the dots

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Once upon a time,

In the vast Indian hinterland,

There was an obscure village,

Caught in a time-warp,

With a farm shrouded in secrecy,

Under a never-ending night,

In which a mysterious pyre smoldered,

Giving rise to a cloud of lethargic smoke ,

And a murky, malevolent mist ,

As a broken body burnt to ashes,

Its spirit traumatized,

Everything enveloped in a pall of gloom……

A captive father,

A sobbing mother,

Desperate to unshackle their helplessness,

From the grip of backbreaking poverty,

And the timeless otherness of caste,

Which, till this day,

Basks in all its indefensible glory,

Leading to a million unanswered questions,

And a roar of deafening silence…….

Amen!

16 responses to “Connecting the dots”

  1. Kulvinder Avatar
    Kulvinder

    Actually wanted to see the political tones involved in hathras although u have tried to catch the chord of the poor political victims dying in that temperature how dirty politicians have become just using farmers or illiterate people on religion etc .

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Grateful Di! for taking time from your extremely busy schedule to write this review; i deliberately wanted to keep the focus on the incident as I am not sure of what has gone in the making of the episode so bizarre…..

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  2. rana3287 Avatar
    rana3287

    A new type of writing I saw today. You really have the variety within you.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks bro for your encouraging review and observations…ever so grateful..

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  3. yaserhusain Avatar
    yaserhusain

    Truly heart wrenching Sir!
    Full of emotions, very powerfully expressed Sir.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear….for your words of appreciation….also, grateful for going through all my compositions with the keen eye of a mature reader….keeps me motivated…

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  4. hiturajeev Avatar
    hiturajeev

    Profound and heart touching and so relevant even today. Everytime l read it I find new context and meanings where the soul is touched by the words penned by you my friend.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your words of appreciation…..anything coming from your end always has a special significance for me..

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  5. bamby nanda Avatar

    I Actually feel that no one else could have used better expressions to narrate this composition.You have really done a marvellous job at “Connecting these dots “,Aps. Great work.

    On Tue, Dec 8, 2020, 21:14 Musings of a Delhi Boy wrote:

    > APS Malhotra posted: ” Once upon a time, In the vast Indian hinterland, > There was an obscure village, Caught in a time-warp, With a farm shrouded > in secrecy, Under a never-ending night, In which a mysterious pyre > smoldered, Giving rise to a cloud of le” >

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Gratitude for your words of appreciation; coming from a dear and discerning friend it truly means a lot to me.

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  6. vandanadu Avatar
    vandanadu

    The others that we ‘all’ are to ‘them’….
    Can feel the pain deep inside

    This pain is not their’s
    It’s our own
    As we see the solidarity missing….

    The fear inside takes away the pride in ‘Being Human’….

    Respect for the courage to pen down your emotions….

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      So proud of your remarkable review….with its profound nuances and sensitivity….thanks for going through all my compositions with the keenness and minuteness of a teacher…finally, thanks for d appreciation buddy…

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  7. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    Trying to pen down a very tragic event which has been heart rendering is a very difficult task and having taken out courage to give your emotions support of words, it becomes all the more important that words don’t fail you.
    Your multi-syllable words come very close to echo your sentiments.
    My appreciation!

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Dear Rajiv, first of all please accept my sincerest gratitude for going through all my compositions with the keenness and minuteness of a master which you obviously are. It gives me a feeling of immense self satisfaction and worth. Thanks once again….

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  8. Debashis Naik Chennai Avatar
    Debashis Naik Chennai

    Good one !
    Especially the last sentence /the defining of the deafening

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your words of appreciation…do go through the compositions more often, atleast for old times sake….so grateful for your expression of love…

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