Each day, my friend….

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You make me green with envy,

The color of algae,

On the surface of a stagnant pond,

Each day, my friend…..

Before the Sun peeps from beyond the horizon,

After a long night’s slumber,

Your chirping invokes the creator,

Even as I shift sides in my bed,

After a restless spell of sleep,

Each day, my friend….

I feel trapped in brick and mortar,

You romance the sky, celebrating your freedom,

You, the tiny bird,

With blue feathers and black beak,

You make me green with envy,

Each day, my friend…….

25 responses to “Each day, my friend….”

  1. I. S. khanna Avatar

    You have quite aptly drawn a comparison between a free bird and self imprisoning of mortals in the vagaries of punishing daily chores of life while identifying the potential of the former to invoke his creature with its freedom and the later’s self trapping in drudgeries of routine life by effectively comparing it with the stagnant pool emitting envy of getting green by its alague while identifying conspicuously the pleasures of freedom.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Uncle, thanks for taking time from your busy schedule to go through the poem….I am really grateful that you have have appreciated the nuances which I have used to pen the poem….your blessings always mean a lot to me…grateful….

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  2. yaserhusain Avatar
    yaserhusain

    Beautiful Sir,
    Thanks for sharing!

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear for having liked the poem…..grateful….

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  3. Sandeep Mathur Avatar
    Sandeep Mathur

    Very Nice AP

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear for having liked the poem…..grateful

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  4. sanjaymadaneok Avatar
    sanjaymadaneok

    Nice APS👍

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for having liked the poem….gratefullll

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  5. dharmila Avatar
    dharmila

    Superb.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks madam for your appreciation… means a lot to me…. grateful…..

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  6. pknayar1970 Avatar

    Wow APS . This is the best shorter new genre composition from you . Such a simple one and so profound !

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      You made my day! Can’t say anything more brother….

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  7. Debashis Naik Chennai Avatar
    Debashis Naik Chennai

    So ap it looks like a conscious effort to move to verse.
    Good attempt.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Trying to experiment…will take time to improve… thanks for the the encouragement brother….

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  8. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    Very well written
    The multi syllable words shows the heaviness of the heart
    Not too sure whether I am correct or not!
    Could identify!

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear for having liked the post…and you are right in pointing about the particular choice of words which I have done in an attempt to enhance the underlying emotions and sentiments of the poem… hopefully I have succeeded….

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  9. akashtiw Avatar
    akashtiw

    No words to express
    Such is my envy for The Bird
    While I toil, and scheme and impress
    The beauty of life is what
    The little birds express !

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks Akash….for your words of encouragement and appreciation… always means a lot to me…. gratitude🙏🙏🙏

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  10. Abrar Sheriff M Avatar
    Abrar Sheriff M

    Flights of Fantasy, happiness the birds are better than humans, unbridled freedom. The play of Colours, you are venturing into capturing our hearts.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother….for having gone through the post and your words of encouragement…..It means a lot to me in my quest to hone my skills…. grateful

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  11. vandanadu Avatar
    vandanadu

    And the carefree bird continues to explore new horizons……
    Unaware of our feelings and thirst to uncage from multiples…….💚

    Lovely !

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      True buddy…. thanks for having gone through the poem and your appreciation… your encouragement gives me motivation to perform better at every stage….

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  12. nitesh Avatar

    Beautifully written! 👍✨

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks for your words of appreciation…. grateful…..

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      1. nitesh Avatar

        Pleasure is all mine, sir! 😊

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