Dilli, Amaltas and the lone eagle

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As my beloved Dilli,

Covered under a shroud of dirty-brown haze,

Is battered by the scorching loo *,                                                                  

Its people, exasperated by power cuts and water shortages,

Feel optimism and verve slither away,

Like sand slipping from a closed fist,                                 

And the ogres of misery and despair closing in,                    

Like the foreboding God of Apocalypse……….                            

Mercifully, even in the midst of this tedium,                                         

There is a dash of life and color round the corner,

As amaltas**,its branches adorned by a blossom of incredible beauty,

Grace, freshness and vibrancy,

Rolls out an opulent carpet of yellow/orange flowers,

Sometimes alone, often in a row of brotherhood,

To shower a feeling of serenity, and hope……….                      

Stirring a lone eagle from its extended snooze,

Onto a flight of excitement and bliss,

High above the Dilli skyline……….

* loo: The brutal hot winds which lash most of north India in the summer months, before the onset of monsoons

** amaltas: Cassia fistula, commonly known as golden shower tree which has yellow flowers in the peak of summer

16 responses to “Dilli, Amaltas and the lone eagle”

  1. pknayar1970 Avatar

    Nice one APS

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks brother for your encouragement……..it is always an honour for me…..grateful……

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  2. yaserhusain Avatar
    yaserhusain

    Beautifully penned Sir!
    Pleasure going through your poem and relating my past Life in Dilli…:)

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks dear for your words of profuse appreciation…gratitude ….

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  3. Ritu Avatar
    Ritu

    Lucid, picturesque….

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks Ritu for the words of appreciation…gratitude….

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  4. dtnaturelover Avatar
    dtnaturelover

    Author has optimistically looked at harsh summer of Delhi, where inspiration to shine bright is blooming in Amaltas and a source of inspiration, the Eagle adds wings to reader imagination.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Yes Deepak….summer and amaltass is an analogy for the deeply distressing times we are passing through…and with optimism and colour , normal life will just be round the corner, hopefully….thanks for going through it in such detail

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  5. Abrar Sheriff M Avatar
    Abrar Sheriff M

    Ingenuity of using Indian words ,for once the loo part astonished me. The Amaltas brought back memories of those days in North. Sprinkle your Poetry with Indian words and serve a Desi flavour. Good.

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      You have appreciated the subtle nuances which I have tried to incorporate in the poem as an experiment ..grateful

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  6. JP Singh Avatar

    Very well described

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks my Guiding light….

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  7. sanjaymadaneok Avatar
    sanjaymadaneok

    👌👍
    धुंधली है नज़रें ओर ऑंखें में पानी
    धुँऐ ने बदली मेरी दिल्ली की कहानी

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Yes brother…we are indeed living through tough times…the ogres of pollution, population and traffic are taking a terrible toll on our beloved Dilli…

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  8. Rajiv Dutta Avatar
    Rajiv Dutta

    Though written in poetry form, it’s the narrative style that becomes dominant.
    Very prosaic.once again the choice of words is determined by the somber mood of the writer

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    1. APS Malhotra Avatar

      Thanks Rajiv for having gone through the prose-poem and your in-depth analysis…..you are right in pointing out that the narrative style is more dominant at one stage….thanks for the encouraging words about my selection of words…grateful .

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